??2003年英语大作文（描图+阐释意义+阐释生活含义）
directions:?study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
2) point out its implications in our life.
you should write about 200 words neatly on answer sheet 2. (20 points)
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1. 高分范文：
the set of drawings above vividly depicts?the destiny of a flower?in different circumstances. in the first cartoon, the flower?is placed?in a comfortable greenhouse?that shelters it from the threatening lightning and storm. with proper temperature, moisture and fertilizer, the flower?is growing?in full bloom. on the contrary, when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.
the purpose of the drawings is to show us that?the flower growing in the green house?cannot withstand the test of the storm, yet?the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed?should be taken more seriously. firstly, the delicate flower?is naturally associated with?young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse?epitomizes?parents’ doting care and abundant material supplies?that can shield the children from the storms or the harsh reality. secondly,?once?the young people begin to seek independence?and accept challenges?from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties.
accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings. on the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten the youth to be more independent in life. on the other hand, parents should be sensible enough to give their children more freedom to deal with troubles and problems. only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people?cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they?become winners in this competitive world.
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上述这组图生动描述了一朵鲜花在不同环境中的命运。在第一幅漫画中，这朵鲜花被放在舒适的温室里，保护它免于可怕的闪电和风雨。拥有合适的温度、湿度和肥料，鲜花正在充分绽放。相反，当被搬出温室并暴露在风雨之下时，鲜花很快就凋谢枯萎了，花瓣散落一地。
这些图画的目的是告诉我们温室花朵经不起风雨，然而我们应该认真对待它们所微妙传达的的象征含义。首先，这朵娇弱的鲜花自然和我们的年轻人联系起来，具体而言，就是当代社会的独生子女。温室是保护孩子免受风雨的父母溺爱和优越物质条件的缩影，而风雨就是严峻的现实。其次，一旦年轻人开始寻求独立并且接受来自现实世界的挑战，人们发现他们已经被惯坏了，在困难面前无法足够坚强。
总之，我们很有必要从这些发人深思的图画中得出积极的含义。一方面，我们可以经常利用它们来启发年轻人在生活中更加独立。另一方面，父母们应该充满理智给孩子们更多自由来处理困难和问题。只有经历更多的挑战和磨练，年轻人才能培养强大的个性和能力，而且只有这样他们才能成为这个竞争世界中的强者。
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2. 黄金模块：
(1) 作文结构：
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图画描述
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para 2
列举原因
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para 3
归纳总结
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(2) 句式多变换：非谓做状语?
when removed from the greenhouse and exposed to the driving rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with the petals scattered on the ground.
(3) 句式多变换：非谓做定语
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(4) 句式多变换：倒装句?
only by undergoing more challenges and toils in adversity can young people cultivate strong personality and ability, and only in this way can they become winners in this competitive world.
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(5) 人生哲理：独立
自立 self-independence
溺爱 dote, spoil
独生子女 only child
激烈竞争 fierce competition
啃老族 boomerang kids,
neet(not currently engaged in education, employment or training)
不劳而获 reap without sowing
两代关系
代沟 generation gap
弥合差距 bridge the gap
相互理解 mutual understanding
误解 misunderstanding
照顾 care, take care of, look after
虐待 mistreat, maltreat, ill-treat
老龄化社会 aging society
人口老龄化 population aging
老年人 old/aged people, the old/aged/elders/elderly, senior citizens
奉行孝道 practice filial piety
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2012年（英语一）大作文（描图+阐释意义+给出评论）
directions: write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay you should
1) describe the drawing briefly
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments
you should write neatly on answer sheet2. (20 points)
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1. 高分范文：
as is symbolically demonstrated in the cartoon,?two individuals?respond to?the same event?in completely diverse ways. the person?on the left?airs his dissatisfaction and disappointment?when a bottle is overturned, while?the man on the right?is hurry to?raise it up, with a sweet smile on his face. we are informed that?various folks?take different attitudes?toward the same scene. ?
the aim of the portrayal is to illustrate that?keeping optimistic?is of utmost significance?to both our society and our life. in the first place, optimism?brings us creative power into play, arouses our enthusiasm for work?and helps us overcome difficulties. in other words, with pessimism, achievements can hardly be made. in the second place, keeping optimistic?gives us light when we are in dark?and encouragement when we are dismayed. it is optimism, rather than genius and extraordinary abilities,?that inspires us to finish the arduous task. with optimism, the goal we set?can be reached, and the hard nut can be cracked.
in conclusion, being optimistic?enables people to behave wisely, kindly and confidently,?and it is?also?crucial for any individual’s, in terms of both character and competence.
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如图所示，两个人对同一件事情的反应截然相反。瓶子倒后，左边的人表达了不满和失望，然而右边的人却面带微笑，急着把它扶起来。我们由此得知，不同的人对同一事物态度不同。
这幅漫画的目的是阐明保持乐观对我们的生活至关重要。首先，乐观能使我们发挥创造力，点燃我们对工作的激情，并 助我们克服困难。换言之，悲观时，我们很难取得任何成绩。其次，我们
身处黑暗，乐观能给我们带来光明；当我们灰心沮丧，乐观能给予我们鼓励。是乐观而不是天才或卓越的才能，在激励我们完成艰巨的任务。拥有乐观，我们才能实现设定的目标，克服难题。
总之，乐观能使人行事睿智、仁慈、自信，它也是个人性格和能力培养中不可缺少的部分。
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2. 黄金模块：
(1) 文章结构：
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(2) 句式多变换：强调句
it is optimism, rather than genius and extraordinary abilities,?that inspires us to finish the arduous task.
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(3) 写作核心词汇——人生哲理：坚持
保持乐观??keep?optimistic
合作??teamwork
爱心??love
持续努力??make constant efforts
自信??self-confidence
诚信??honesty
不断努力 make constant efforts
决不放弃 never give up
绝不停止进步 never stop making progress
获得成功 achieve success
创新 innovation
勤奋 diligence
奋斗精神 striving spirit
人生观 outlook of life
世界观 world outlook
恒心 perseverance
耐心 patience
谨慎 prudence
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