原标题：24考研英语一写作解析
小作文：主张+阐明
51. directions: read the following email from an international student and write a reply.
dear li ming,
i’ve got a class assignment to make an oral report on an ancient scientist, but i’m not sure how to prepare for it. can you give me some advice? thank you for your help.
yours,
paul
write your answer in about 100 words on the answer sheet. do not use your own name in your email, use “li ming” instead. (10 points)
【题干翻译】
指令：阅览下面一封世界学生的电子邮件，并写下回复。
尊敬的李明，
我有一项课堂作业，作一个关于某位古代科学家的口头陈述，但我不晓得该如何预备。你能给我一些主张吗？谢谢你的协助。
你的
保罗
把答案写在答题纸上，大约100个字。不要在你的电子邮件中运用你自个的名字，用“李明”替代。（10分）
【解析】
该考题查询主张信，就如何做好关于一位古代科学家的口头陈述提主张，但未指定科学家的名字。因而，正文是不是提及科学家名字均可，要点是如何预备好这个陈述，比方，怎么选择自个感快乐喜爱的科学家、如何做好陈述等。
范文：
dear paul,
quite pleased to receive your email and i am writing for the purpose of making suggestions on your pre
paration for the oral report.
to begin with, it is advisable for you to purchase a book about the history of science. it is reading this book that will enable you to know more ancient scientists and select the one you are interested in. then, you are supposed to search for certain pictures of the scientist and his or her major achievements on the internet, which may bring you inspiration, arouse your passion for exploring, and help you make the report successfully. you can also print the pictures out and show them during your report.
if you have any other questions, please feel free to inform me.
yours sincerely,
li ming
尊敬的保罗，
很高兴收到你的电子邮件，我写信意图是就你口头陈述的预备提主张。
首要，你大约买一本关于科学史的书。正是阅览这本书使得你能晓得更多的古代科学家，并选择你感快乐喜爱的那位。然后，你大约在网上查找一些关于这位科学家及其首要作用的图像，这可以会给你带来构思，激起你的探究热心，并 你成功做好这次的陈述。你也可以把图像打印出来并在陈述时展示。
如有任何其他疑问或需求，请随时奉告我。
您诚挚的，
李明
高文文：公园
part b
directions: write an essay of 160—200 words based on the following drawing and chart. in your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing and the chart briefly,
2)explain the intended meaning, and
3)give your comments.
your should write neatly on answer sheet 2.(20 points)
解析：
题干中的图像和图表均触及到“公园”，因而只需在写作中触及“公园”这一主题就不算完全跑题。除公园外，图像和图表中还触及到了公园健身、文娱和公园数量等，这些要素也大约触及。
范文：
in the drawing, there is a park, in which several residents are doing physical exercise, with smiles on their faces. one of them comments, “this nearby newly-built park is gorgeous!” meanwhile, a chart can be noticed, which illustrates that the number of parks increased remarkably, from 406 in 2021 to 670 in 2022.
such scenarios, apparently, can be associated with the significant role of parks in people’s daily life. in recent years, china was characterized by its boom and prosperity in economy, which enabled the government to possess extra financial budgets to construct infrastructures, including parks. this phenomenon is particularly worth attention for the reason that parks can bring citizens places to relax or do sports, arouse their passion for life, and help them enjoy convenience. a case in point is me. as a senior who is preparing for the national entrance examination for postgraduate studies, i get up early every day to do sports in the nearby park. it is this positive habit that enables me to keep healthy and efficient.
thus, it is advisable for the government to build more parks for the public. meanwhile, society as a whole is supposed to foster a positive atmosphere of protecting the harmonious and beautiful environment of parks.
图中有一个公园，几个居民正在公园里进行体育训练，他们面带笑脸。其间一人谈论道，“家门口新建的公园太棒了！”与此一起，可以留心到一张图表，清楚展示了公园数量的显着增加，从2021年的406个添加到2022年的670个。
显着，上述场景能被联络到公园在我们往常日子中的重要作用。这些年，我国的特征是经济的昌盛昌盛，这使政府有额定的财务核算来缔造包括公园在内的基础设备。这一表象特别值得重视，因为公园可认为市民供给放松或运动的场所，激起他们的日子热心，协助他们享受便当。我就是一个极好的比方。作为一名正在预备考研的大四学生，我每天都会早上到邻近的公园里运动。正是这种活泼的习气使我可以坚持安康和高效。
因而，政府大约为大众缔造更多的公园。一起，整个社会大约营建一种维护公园调和美丽环境的活泼空气。
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