原标题：考前急救！75分钟，杨凡达教师教你写出8/13分考研小作文
同学们，再过最终2个月，就是2021考研的初试！不管是英语、政治以及数学等公共课，仍是专业课温习，都现已进入到了抉择输赢的冲刺要害期！
因而，韦林名师团的英语作文教育专家——杨凡达教师，特别为同学带来一节《we learn写作宝典秋季课-第8周精讲小作文》的open day限时翻开课程。
本年2021考研英语新大纲，英语一和英语二的写作有些，呈现了一个比照清楚的改变：
2021年考研 英语一
2021年考研 英语二
根据往期的真题来看，考研英语作文的出题规则，首要是以函件写作为主。备忘录和陈述等题型，尽管也列入在查询规模之内，可是历年以来查询次数并不算频频。
可是，本年的情况略微有一些不一样。不管是英语一仍是英语二，考试大纲的小作文有些，都清楚说到了备忘录、公务信函与陈述等字眼。
杨凡达教师认为，不打扫本年的考研，要点查询公务信函，陈述以及备忘录的可以性。
备忘录以及各类公函的写作，一向是同学们的缺陷。
咱们先来学习一下这道出自《we learn写作宝典秋季课》的例题：
directions:
imagine that you are the committee chairman for the upcoming urban sports meet held in your college. write a memo to all the volunteers to remind them of dos and don’ts.
do not write your own name in the letter. use “zhang hua” instead.
这是关于举办运动会之前，作为组委会主席的你，需要为自愿者们写出一则备忘录。提示自愿者们需要有哪些留心思项，规则与需求，以及其他事项的补白。
在初步写作之前，首要需要清楚备忘录的根柢格局：
to 收信人：all volunteers
from 写信人：zhang hua, the committee chairman
date 写信日期：oct 26th, 2021
subject 主题：the fifth urban sports meet
在揭露课上，杨凡达教师罗列出3篇来自韦林学员的范文。请同学们一篇篇细心阅览。
以下作文的划线有些，是杨凡达教师认为还可以持续改进的当地。
同学们可以选择其间的一篇，在文末谈论区进行留言，提出你自个的观点。然后，再给出你所认为的得分。
第一篇作文：
the sports games 
will begin in this sunday and we should pay attention to some important matters. first, please wear the recognized uniform and the logo hat which have prepared in the committee back office, on the second floor of the main stadium.
second, please remember to sign in on time every day. if you have to leave, you should report to your direct superior and handover your work.
third, please be familiar with the service manual to make sure that you can solve some problems in time. fourth, get ready enough food and water, they can offer energy and help after works at once. above all, please make our college proud.
第二篇作文：
now that the fifth urban sport meet is coming. here, i want to say a few word to everyone. first, you should always remember who you are because everything you say and do represents our school.
second, you should wear your uniform and id cards during working times. considering that some students might lose their id cards, the committee made three for each person.
third, you should always keep smile on your face, and contact your teacher in case of emergency. and the most importantly, never lose your temper with spectators or athletes in the presence of passers-by.
然后，杨凡达教师给出一篇写作宝典内的范文。
主张同学们如今保藏这篇文章，细心研读之后，拓宽出一个专归于自个的“高分作文写作模板”：
the event will open in five days’ time and here are some important reminders. first, please remember to arrive on time every day and to sign in when you come.
second, wear the uniform. if it becomes accidentally damaged or soiled, take it to the laundry room on the third floor of the north section of the main stadium, where you can exchange it for a new one.
third, please don’t walk away from your position without permission. report to your direct superior if you have to leave. finally, never lose your temper with spectators as well as the athletes in the presence of passers-by. above all, please make our college proud.
考研英语的写作，想要拿到分数，有必要经由三个循环进程“看、写、改”。
假定你，出于时刻急迫而认为：“在作文上花时刻，收成并不大。”
那么，杨凡达教师想反问一句：“凭啥你觉得在英语的其它板块花时刻，得到的收成就更大呢？”回来搜狐，查看更多
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